With this being our first SM CAP (yeesh, USUM is upon us and here we are...), there's a few things that I'd like to prod in here.
SM brought us Evolution moves. These are moves learnt the immediate moment you evolve into the given Pokemon - You could evolve a Weedle into a Kakuna at level 90 and it'd still learn Harden on evolution. People who use Veekun as movepool size reference will have noted that these are listed as level "0", compared to HS moves and so on which are listed with a -. Perhaps not the most exciting thing on the planet, but it's an option for people who want it.
Also, people are using HS moves to cover moves such as Brave Bird and Fairy Wind, so I think it's worth remembering how move relearner moves, well, work. If you want a move to be a move relearner, you're going to
need four Level 1 moves after those moves, otherwise those moves will simply be learnt on capture.
The reason why you need those 4 moves I've outlined here after a chat with Meeper on the Discord.
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Also, there needs to be more feedback in this darned thread.
Reviloja753: Interesting story for the Level Up movepool! I'd consider slightly streamlining the Levels themselves (Rather than being random, a slight structuring could help, even if you switch patterns later on). That said, in-game can be fairly random (Bewear is 5-4-5-4-7-6-6-6-7-6, which is... bearly cohesive). You'll definitely want to go over your tutor moves again (I can't see Outrage in there atm, which should be in there given you also have it by level up).
Menshay: 14 LU moves is a touch on the short side, so I'd perhaps consider a 15th move somewhere down the line (15 brings you in line with Togedemaru, Minior, Drampa, and Turtornator). Obviously you'll want to update with USUM tutors at some stage, but with that said I like a lot of the choices you've made (Nightmare as a notable changing point move, for instance).
Garbagery: WIP is noted :P. As with Rev, I'm not sure if there's any real LU pattern there, but I await hearing about justifications. That said, the LU looks pretty solid beyond that.
Vann Accessible: I find it most incredible that you managed to get a 9 level move cycle from Dhelmise, which is highly fitting for REM patterns (90 minutes being one sleep cycle). Rollout and Defense Curl are really interesting flavour options. I'm interested for why you've got Secret Power in the egg movepool (It's no longer mandatory, feels out of place), and I'm going to assume you're WIP on the tutors. As with Revi, Outrage can 100% go in there as well as LU. Last thing is that you might want to see the Heart Scale thing I posted above.
ZardX: As a formatting thing, consider putting your justifications at the bottom of your post, as well as listing TMs by TM number. You've got a
LOT of move choices there which I think are explicitly going to be illegal (Icicle Crash), or make little-to-no-sense (Night Daze, an 85 BAP move which is a Zoroark Signature move, makes nul sense on Pajantom).
mxmts: Woo, Imprison! Given your tutor set and the fact that you're at 57 moves so far, I'm going to assume that you're currently still WIP? It's a simpler LU pool, but it could definitely fit in with the others. I'm glad to see you've got a small egg movepool (I'd consider trying to get one more pure-flavour option in there), which definitely helps it feel like a SM Pokemon.
P2X7: You've got your explantions incoming, so I'll just mention that I'm very interested in seeing how you justify Sleep Talk as a Heart Scale move. Also... that's a
very small TM pool, with a few numbering mistakes (Shadow Ball (TM30) and Psychic (TM29) are numbered the wrong way round, and Fly (TM76) and Aerial Ace (TM40) are misnumbered). Also noting that you can definitely put Shadow Claw in there, so I'm going to assume you're still very much WIP.
Deck Knight: I don't make much of a secret that this is one of my favourite movepools due to how you've done the LU Pool. A level up movepool which I can 100% believe is how you'd see them in-game, including internal repeats, and TMs/Tutors that're echoed later on. The only negative comment I can bring is that I'd like to see it get Psych Up (which has a Move-Move correlation with Trick Room in XY, and the TM is still present).
Falchion: That... is a
very big LU movepool. 29 is larger than Silvally or Gallade. I'm... not actually sure if you actaully could pare that back? But it shows that you've got a lot going on when you look at tutors, since you have a relatively empty set. Tutors will definitely want to include Spite and Outrage from LU, and you do have some leeway to see if there are any other tutor options worth adding.
Reigaheres (aka really cool person who helped with my movepool): Although I suspect you're gonna edit with Tutors, you'd probably want to stick Laser Focus at the top of the L1 moves in order to get it as the relearner move. The 4-5-4-5 works well as the movepool pattern - and I imagine you're probably going to shrink the Egg movepool now that tutors reduce the workload there. Like Deck, the moves feel like they're generally in the correct place (with the lone exception, in my opinion, being Dream Eater).
V-Create tutor next time tbh
Drew: I really like the idea of forming a trinity with Drampa and Turtornator. Shadow Punch feels a
tiny bit early (You could potentially swap it with Dragon Rage, matching the level Golett gets SPunch?), but it's great to see a solid attempt to get Brave Bird in the movepool without it being HS or Egg. Nice to see a smaller Egg movepool (Complete with Play Rough, which I actually really like as an option). That said, why is Iron Tail in there and not in Tutors?
MeepBard: Good luck trimming this down to 75! (It's doable - my original movepool was around 79, and that was
before adding USUM move tutors ^^;)
Beyond that, the LU pool flows well (Although you don't need two copies of Brave Bird up top). Some interesting options in the Egg Movepool. Oh, Taunt is banned (if not in the OP), so you can trim that from your TMs.
G-Luke: Check out the Move Relearner thing I linked up top (atm your dragon is being born a very Brave Bird ^^;). You'll probably also want to wait for some confirmation on Nasty Plot (though I hardly think it's a viable option personally from 51 SpA...). You only have 36 TMs, and Bind's both Tutor and LU, so you're at just 72 moves.
Beyond that, the LU pool scales neatly in power, and the LU pattern is fairly easily grasped. Definitely quite remarkable that only three movepools have taken Confuse Ray, including yours.
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Also, since I forgot to tag 'em before...
snake_rattler and
cbrevan ? (Sorry ^^;)