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[filily]

so i made a team for ag for fun, because i stole all my other teams. it's electricity based except for a single pokemon. it's not very good, but i've won a decent amount of games with it.

Instinct (Zapdos) @ BrightPowder
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 248 HP / 8 SpA / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Double Team
- Baton Pass
- Thunderbolt
- Thunder Wave

Electricity (Arceus-Electric) @ Zap Plate
Ability: Multitype
EVs: 248 HP / 252 SpA / 8 SpD
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Draco Meteor
- Judgment
- Thunder
- Calm Mind

doge (Manectric-Mega) (M) @ Manectite
Ability: Static
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpA / 252 Spe
Hasty Nature
- Thunder
- Body Slam
- Fire Fang
- Light Screen

electric smeargle (Smeargle) (M) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Moody
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 248 HP / 8 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Switcheroo
- Spore
- Cotton Guard
- Baton Pass

another doge (Raikou) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Pressure
IVs: 0 Atk
- Mud-Slap
- Toxic
- Calm Mind
- Thunderbolt

electricity man (Thundurus) @ Rocky Helmet
Ability: Defiant
EVs: 4 Atk / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Hasty Nature
- Rain Dance
- Thunder
- Brick Break
- Nasty Plot




thanks!

 

[Satanic Beast]

Hi. I'm not a mod or anything, but I would like to inform you that this team is breaking rule number 4. There an RMT Resource Thread thing above all of the RMTs that says,if I am correct, is mandatory reading before writing an rmt. I highly suggest looking at it. The rule you're breaking is not having sufficient descriptions,telling us why you chose them,what roles they fill,etc. I recommend looking at other RMTs as well.

 

[filily]

Hi. I'm not a mod or anything, but I would like to inform you that this team is breaking rule number 4. There an RMT Resource Thread thing above all of the RMTs that says,if I am correct, is mandatory reading before writing an rmt. I highly suggest looking at it. The rule you're breaking is not having sufficient descriptions,telling us why you chose them,what roles they fill,etc. I recommend looking at other RMTs as well.

my bad, thank you much

 

[SubMindRaikou]

you might want to try the tier monotype, its basically the same idea as what your going with (only using one type) except you wont be able to use arceus smeargle or evasion. (you also wont have to face teams of 6 xerneas or prinal groudon and such :p). also since this is ag you might want to add a few more arceus, which will generally be better hit harder and take hits easier than most pokemon on your team.