AAA Total Lunar Eclipse (Unaware Cresselia) [Done]

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[SET]
Unaware (Cresselia) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
IVs: 0 Atk
Bold Nature
- Calm Mind
- Moonlight
- Stored Power
- Moonblast

[SET COMMENTS]
Cresselia's titanic bulk and access to Calm Mind allow it to pose a major threat to the opponent's team, turning other setup sweepers into fodder. It can also leverage its Psychic typing to check huge threats such as Azelf and Deoxys-S. Late game, Cresselia can function as a terrifying and offbeat set-up sweeper, boosting and using Moonblast to hit Dark-types such as Chien-Pao and Roaring Moon. Cresselia's ideal opportunity to set up is in front of passive walls like Manaphy, Swampert, and non-Unaware Blissey. Cresselia's best teammates are Pokemon that can take on Dark-Type moves like Corviknight and Great Tusk. Prankster Corviknight and Deoxys-S can set dual screens to make Cresselia's setup easier. Cresselia also appreciates teammates such as Mandibuzz, Blissey, and RegenVest Hisuian Goodra that can switch into Ghost-types.
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TIME FOR QC o

 

[cat]

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Cresselia's titanic bulk and passivity, it's only natural that it would be paired with the ability, Unaware. mmm not really, its more than that + other bulkier mons like skarm dont really run unaware so isnt really intuitive, instead its a passable unaware wall that can setup and post a threat Cresselia's can function similarly to Scream Tail in the early game, as your main sponge for powerful attacks such as Azelf's Expanding Force and Zapdos Galar's Close Combat. saying that a mon can play the role of x mon doesnt help and explain why youd use cress > stail; instead, mention that it leverages its typing to check those threats. The main advantages that Cresselia's has over Scream Tail is that it's main recovery move is Moonlight and has better bulk on the Physical side. In the late game, Cresselia can function as a terrifying and offbeat set-up sweeper, using Calm Mind + Stored Power to decimate most mons and Moonblast to hit dark types such as Chien-Pao and Roaring Moon on the switch. Cresselia's ideal opportunity to sweep, should be infront of passive walls like Blissey, Swampert, and Manaphy, and non-Unaware Blissey. Cresselia's best teammates are hazard removers like Corviknight or Great Tusk. Corviknight is especially a good pairing since, it can tank most dark type moves like Knock-Off and Crunch with ease. why corv? tusk switches into dark types like banded moon much easier than corv can. More good partners for Cresselia include ones that can take a shadow balls for it, like the plentiful Regenvesters and Blissey. Cresselia appreciates teammates that can switch into Ghost-types likes Gengar and Gholdengo. With Blissey, it can spread thunder-wave to really squeeze out all the Calm Mind turns for Cresselia, while the opponent is potentially fully paralyzed. spread paralysis with Thunder Wave, allowing Cresselia to have an easier time cleaning late game.

Would like to recheck after implementation, please ping me here or on discord, my tag is othermetagames

 

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just implemented, would like to see what could be improved further cat

 

[cat]

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ditto

[SET]
Unaware (Cresselia) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
IVs: 0 Atk
Bold Nature
- Calm Mind
- Moonlight
- Stored Power
- Moonblast

[SET COMMENTS]
Cresselia's titanic bulk and access to Calm Mind, allows it to pose a major threat to the opponent, when their set-up moves are completely ignored versus it not really sure what the last part means - do you mean that it turns other setup sweepers into setup fodder while walling them? if so, youll want to clarify that. Cresselia's can leverage it's Psychic typing to check huge threats such as Zapdos-Galar's Close Combat and Azelf's Expanding Force with ease. In the late game, Cresselia can function as a terrifying and offbeat set-up sweeper, using Calm Mind + Stored Power to decimate most mons and Moonblast to hit dark types such as Chien-Pao and Roaring Moon on the switch. Cresselia's ideal opportunity to sweep, should be infront of passive walls like Manaphy, Swampert, and non-Unaware Blissey. Cresselia's best teammates are hazard removers like Corviknight or Great Tusk. Both of these defensive behemoths, can usually take a choice-banded dark move from the aforementioned Chien-Pao & Roaring Moon. Great Tusk can withstand banded dark moves much easier but lacks recovery outside of sacrificing your regenerator slot, whilst Corviknight is less much resilient towards these same moves, but it can heal instantly with roost. this sentence doesnt add much that you cant add into the previous sentence. Cresselia appreciates teammates that can switch into Ghost-types likes Gengar and Gholdengo like.... With Blissey, it can spread paralysis with Thunder Wave, allowing Cresselia to have an easier time cleaning late game. make sure bliss is a partner mentioned otherwise this sentence wont make sense

QC 1/2

 

[aiko's band]

is implemented! ready for QC 2/2!

 

[Evie]

amqc, implement what you like

amqc

[SET]
Unaware (Cresselia) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
IVs: 0 Atk
Bold Nature
- Calm Mind
- Moonlight
- Stored Power
- Moonblast

[SET COMMENTS]
Cresselia's titanic bulk and access to Calm Mind, allows it to pose a major threat to the opponent, turning other set-up sweepers into fodder, while also being an immovable wall. Cresselia's can leverage it's its Psychic typing to check huge threats such as Zapdos-Galar's Close Combat gzap does a lot to cress with its other moves, and can just switch out and back in to threaten cress with a knock off or uturn Deoxys-S and Azelf's Expanding Force with ease. In the late game, (RC)Cresselia can function as a terrifying and offbeat set-up sweeper, using Calm Mind + Stored Power to decimate most mons and Moonblast to hit dark types such as Chien-Pao and Roaring Moon on the switch. Cresselia's ideal opportunity to sweep setup, (RC) should be infront of passive walls like Manaphy, Swampert, Corviknight, and non-Unaware Blissey. Cresselia's best teammates are hazard removers either explain why cresselia in particular likes hazard support or change it to something like physical walls like Corviknight or Great Tusk. Both of these defensive behemoths, (RC) can usually take a choice-banded Choice-Banded dark Dark-type move from the aforementioned Chien-Pao & Roaring Moon. Cresselia appreciates teammates that can switch into Ghost-types likes like Gengar and Gholdengo id mention ceruledge here, such pokemon Pokemon include Blissey, Mandibuzz, and RegenVest Goodra-Hisui. With Blissey, it can spread paralysis with Thunder Wave, allowing Cresselia to have an easier time cleaning late game.
what does bliss twave that lets cresselia clean easier, not including physical attackers that bliss doesnt want to stay in on


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just implemented them btw Orangex

 

[cat]

aiko's band this isnt QC 2/2 yet; Orangex's AMQC is unofficial. please remove their name from the list of credits (do note that it may be added later on) and edit the title back to QC 1/2

 

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Moon duck

[SET]
Unaware (Cresselia) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
IVs: 0 Atk
Bold Nature
- Calm Mind
- Moonlight
- Stored Power
- Moonblast

[SET COMMENTS]
Cresselia's titanic bulk and access to Calm Mind, allows it to pose a major threat to the opponent, turning other set-up sweepers into fodder, while also being an immovable wall while turning opposing setup sweepers into fodder. Cresselia's can leverage its Psychic typing to check huge threats such as Azelf and Deoxys-Speed's Expanding Force with ease. In the late game, Cresselia can function as a terrifying and offbeat set-up sweeper, using Calm Mind + Stored Power to decimate most mons and Moonblast to hit dark types such as Chien-Pao and Roaring Moon on the switch Shorten it down to just mention what Moonblast hits; what Calm Mind + Stored Power does is self-explanatory. Cresselia's ideal opportunity to setup, should be infront of passive walls like Manaphy, Swampert, and non-Unaware Blissey. Cresselia's best teammates are hazard removers like Corviknight or Great Tusk. Both of these defensive behemoths, can usually take a Choice-Banded Dark Move from the aforementioned Chien-Pao & Roaring Moon. Cresselia in particular, really likes hazards being removed because it needs the passive recovery of Leftovers and Moonlight only has 8 total uses, thus it cannot afford to waste it on just healing off hazard damage These sentences are really messy; Cresselia doesn't really struggle with hazards, and the teammates mention is also worded weirdly; Shorten it down to just mention Corviknight & Great Tusk as defensive teammates that can take on Dark-types. Also try to avoid mentioning dex info such as Moonlight PP. Cresselia appreciates teammates that can switch into Ghost-types like Gengar, Gholdengo, and Ceruledge. Teammates include Blissey, Mandibuzz, and RegenVest Goodra-Hisui. With Mandibuzz, it can use Knock Off to lower the power level of these threats, or at least cripple their survivability. These sentences can also be merged to just say something along the line of "Cresselia appreciates teammates that can switch into Ghost-types, such as..."

I would also give an honorable mention to screens setters like Deoxys-S or Corviknight, since they make it easier for cresselia to setup and thus get going.

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Ping me so I can look through it before I stamp QC 2/2

 

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Slither Wing so yeah i did the changes

 

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Moonier duck

[SET]
Unaware (Cresselia) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
IVs: 0 Atk
Bold Nature
- Calm Mind
- Moonlight
- Stored Power
- Moonblast

[SET COMMENTS]
Cresselia's titanic bulk and access to Calm Mind, allows it to pose a major threat to the opponent, turning other set-up sweepers into fodder. Cresselia's can leverage its Psychic typing to check huge threats such as Azelf and Deoxys-Speed. In the late game, Cresselia can function as a terrifying and offbeat set-up sweeper, boosting up and using Moonblast to hit dark types Some examples on dark-types here would be nice. Cresselia's ideal opportunity to setup, should be infront of passive walls like Manaphy, Swampert, and non-Unaware Blissey. Cresselia's best teammates are pokemon that can take a Choice Banded dark moves on Dark-types like Corviknight and Great Tusk. Also, Prankster Corviknight and Deoxys-S can set up Reflect and Light Screen Dual Screens to make Cresselia's setup easier. Cresselia appreciates teammates that can switch into Ghost-types such as Mandibuzz, Blissey and RegenVest Goodra-Hisui Hisuian Goodra. You could probably move this sentence up to where you mention dark-type switchins

Remove spaces here, should only be one space between set & set credits

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Stamping QC 2/2

 

[cat]

GP Team, aiko's band dont forget to tag GP when its ready for GP

 

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GP Check

[SET]
Unaware (Cresselia) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
IVs: 0 Atk
Bold Nature
- Calm Mind
- Moonlight
- Stored Power
- Moonblast

[SET COMMENTS]
Cresselia's titanic bulk and access to Calm Mind, (comma) allows allow it to pose a major threat to the opponent opponent's team, turning other set-up setup sweepers into fodder. Cresselia's It can also leverage its Psychic typing to check huge threats such as Azelf and Deoxys-Speed Deoxys-S. In the late game Late-game, Cresselia can function as a terrifying and offbeat set-up setup sweeper, boosting up and using Moonblast to hit dark types Dark-types such as Chien-Pao & and Roaring Moon. Cresselia's ideal opportunity to setup, should be infront set up is in front of passive walls like Manaphy, Swampert, and non-Unaware Blissey. Cresselia's best teammates are pokemon Pokemon that can take on Dark Dark-type moves like Corviknight and Great Tusk. Also, Prankster Corviknight and Deoxys-Speed Deoxys-S can set up Dual Screens dual screens to make Cresselia's setup easier. Cresselia also appreciates teammates that can switch into Ghost-types such as Mandibuzz, Blissey, (comma) and RegenVest Hisuian Goodra that can switch into Ghost-types.

[SET CREDITS]
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1/1 GP Team done

 

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implemented the above changes, im gonna assume im done