ORAS PU Rate my PU team

[Jacko0Lantern96]

Vullaby
Eviolite
Overcoat
Foul Play
Uturn
Roost
Defog
248 HP 252 Def 8 SpDef Impish nautre

Monferno
Wide Lens
Blaze Grass Knot
Fire Blast
Focus Blast
Nasty Plot
40 Hp 216 SpAtk 252 Spe Timid Nature

Probopass
Air Balloon
Magnet Pull
Flash Cannon
Volt Switch
Earth Power
Hidden Power Fire
172 Hp 252 SpAtk 84 Spe Modest Nature

Clefairy
EViolite
Magic Gaurd
Thunder Wave
Moonblast
Soft Boiled
Knock Off
252 Hp 4 Def 252 Spd Calm nature

Dusknoir
Life Orb
Frisk
Shadow Sneak
Earthquake
Ice Punch
Pursuit
212 Hp 252 Atk 44 Spe Adamant Nature

Gabite
Eviolite
Rough Skin
Stealth Rock
Earthquake
Dragon Claw
Toxic
248 Hp 76 Atk 104 Def 82 Spe Impish Nature


Im not very good at building teams. This is my first real attempt at my own team. Its decent, but I know it can be better. Im willing to change mons. moves. natures. just looking for advice. If you have helpful information please tell me why your suggestion is better. Thank you I apprecate the help.

 

[Celticpride]

Hi,

I'm going to have to lock this for the time being. According to the RMT Resource thread, you need three lines of description per pokemon. If you PM me updated descriptions for this RMT, I'll be happy to unlock this thread at that time. Check the RMT Showcase for examples of well made RMTs.

Have a nice day.