Gen 3 ADV Starmie (OU Revamp) Done!

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hi! it read like the forced damage itself was beating Swampert more easily, whereas I thought the actual point you were trying to convey was that the Starmie player beats Swampert more easily with the help of the forced damage. assuming I was right in that, you could do "helping beat Swampert more easily" or "letting the team beat Swampert more easily" or something like that instead, to avoid the "you". or if you did mean that the forced damage itself beats Swampert more easily, you can keep the original.
 

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